Apart from the fact that he isnt actually a loser, this is a very good attempt . Its the type of English suburban humour that is rarely captured. I swear i used to know people like this.
So refreshing to see a brilliant daft as a brush female character in Jo, she is actually almost a Voltaire type of beautiful simplicity. So many female characters these days have to be super competent, arrogantly confident and one dimensional, basically doing an impersonation of a man. I would pick nice over strong in a female friend every day of the week.
Mike Wozniac's Brian is actually capturing something very subtle and profound about a very decent man struggling to be himself under the weight of cultural capitalism. He is like a Gogol anti hero.
Greg Davis is always funny ,and although i really dont like the gross out humour bits, he has totally funny bones.